Feedback

This is the feedback i received from Sam, but it was late and due to this i am only just putting it on my blog.

Your blog looks very good and incredibly informative with alot of text and a good amount of visuals linking to your research in many feilds.the only thing that i didn't like about it was that there was a lot of large blocks of text, these could do with sub titles or paragraphing or somthing along those lines.

I think this feedback is a good analysis of my blog, and i do agree that perhaps the paragraphs could be broken down into smaller paragraphs of text as sometimes they do appear as big chunks, so breaking the paragraphs down would make the text easier and clearer to read and catagorise - and will try to do this in future posts.